Friday, February 10, 2012

Catching UP!


What with the computer virus, not a lot got done this week.

No books went to press, or back to press. No paper or e-books at all.


Galleys went out, or went out again, on the following:

DRAGON SPEAKER, by Ray Morand.

SNOW ESCAPE, by Roberta Goodman.



Work continued, or began on:

Rootie II, by Elaine Simmons. We submit work to the printer as a favor for the publisher at Pig-E Press.


WWW's BEST SELLING KINDLE BOOKS for the month of December, 2011:

A GHOST AT STALLION'S GATE, by Elizabeth Eagan-Cox
this is the latest in the Shannon Delaney series and was followed closely in sales by the others in that series.

SNOW ESCAPE, by Roberta Goodman

A MEDIC IN IRAQ, by Cole Bolchoz

HOUSE TO KILL FOR, by Judy Reveal

STILL LIFE WITH MUSIC, by C.M. Albrecht


Please remember these are the best selling among Write Words, Inc.'s own titles, NOT the best selling on the amazon.com site.

Thursday, February 9, 2012

Agent Night's Chilli -recipe


AGENT NIGHT’S QUICK & EASY CHILI

(also Gluten-Free)

This recipe is a delicate balance of sweet and spicy. If you want spicier flavor, add chili powder, cayenne pepper, cumin and red pepper. This chili is great for freezing in individual serving containers and then heating in the microwave for a nice hot lunch!

INGREDIENTS:

  • 1.5 pounds of 93% lean Ground Beef (sometimes I substitute 50% with ground turkey)

1 medium yellow onion, chopped finely or nearly pureed in the food processor

16 oz Cream of Tomato Soup (please see below for gluten-free options)**

28 oz Delmonte Chunky Diced Zesty Chili Style tomatoes or equivalent

1 large can of kidney beans (2.5 pounds)

Chopped fresh parsley as desired

1+ tbsp Worcestershire sauce to taste (Lea & Perrins is gluten-free)

  • Shredded Cheddar Cheese for garnish (optional)

NOTE: There are two ways to prepare this – standard stove top or crock pot. I prefer crock pot because it is maintenance-free. Instructions for both are provided.

STOVE TOP COOKING INSTRUCTIONS:

Brown beef in large pot, drain. Add remaining ingredients, cook on medium low until it starts to steam and bubble, then simmer for one hour. I usually let it cool, then put it in the fridge overnight to let the flavors mingle. The next day I heat it up and serve.

CROCK POT COOKING INSTRUCTIONS:

Brown beef in large skillet, drain. Add beef and remaining ingredients to crock pot, cook on low for up to 10 hours.

Garnish with shredded cheddar cheese and serve!

Serves 6-8 people.

Preparation time: 10 minutes

Cooking Time: Stove Top – 1-2 hours; Crock Pot – 8 hours.

**I can recommend the following gluten-free soups:

Pacific Natural Foods Organic Creamy Tomato (available in stores)

Heinz UK Cream of Tomato Soup (can be purchased online in the U.S. through the Gluten-Free Trading Company)

© K. S. Brooks 2009


Wednesday, February 8, 2012

Questions from my e-mail

Question: I finally sold the book we worked on together when I was your student. At the time, I had many reservations about your usage advice, as it differed greatly from what I had been taught in English 101, at college. Now that I'm working with a professional publisher, he is asking for all the same changes you did. Just wanted to say, I should have listened and how did you know?

Answer: Congratulations Janie. Is it still entitled MANY RIVERS? You had a good one going, as I recall.

To answer your question, all educational institutions teach students of English 101 to write exposition. That is written and punctuated far differently from fiction. Each English Department chooses its own teaching tools and the "rules" come out of whatever stylebook they choose to teach from.

Stylebooks vary. Kate Turabian's rules are quite different from E.B. White's, as given in Strunk & White. Many colleges use Strunk & White stylebook. Mine did. But it varies. Strunk is published in Great Britian and both its authors were British. So they follow (and teach) the rules of usage according to the United Kingdom. But the stylebook most professional publishers use in the United States is the Chicago Manual of Style, a US publication. It is a publisher and printer's tool.

Style and spelling varies greatly between the United Kingdom and the US. In Britain, you say, "Heigh ho!" to your neighbour, pay your bills with a cheque, and carefully leave off the final s in possessives if the name ends in an S. But in America, you say, "Hi-ho," to your neighbor, pay your bills with a check, and must make sure to add the final s in possessives (Zeus's, not Zues'), if the name ends in s.

In America, ONLY plural possessives get the apostrophe, without the following S.

All this may seem very picky to those who are not grammar buffs. But if a publisher puts out a book that doesn't follow the rules for his country, it makes him or her look like a dolt. You may not know it, but when I'm not wearing my writer's hat, or my teaching hat, I wear my publisher's hat, so I do know.

I recently was called to account by none other than amazon.com, because of purportedly "missing pages" in a book file. It seems the book started on page 3 and they wanted to know where pages 1 and 2 were. I have more than 550 books on Amazon.com. All of them are numbered accordingly. This is the first time they noticed...so I can only assume that some customer complained to them.

Every professional typesetter knows that page 1 is the cover of the book, page 2, is the inside front cover, and the text starts on page 3. Any "Front Matter" -- title page, dedication, and so on -- gets numbered in roman numerals. The text of the book always starts on page 3. If you don't believe me, pick a book off your shelf and look. If it was published by a real company, it will start on page 3.

If you see it otherwise in a PDF, it means the book was self-published, or published by someone who had no clue how a published book should look. It is also as described by the Chicago Manual of Style.

E-book files, because they are recreated and renumbered by whatever program converts them from a text.doc to the format needed for a specific brand of reader, will not be numbered that way, unless the typeset PDF was used to create them.

My late business partner, Sandra List, God rest her soul, was a professional typesetter for the GPO. I had set type at the newspaper, but had no clue about books. She gave me a copy of The Chicago Manual of Style and taught me what I needed to know so our books would look like they came from a "real publisher." I have followed her rules ever since.

So to answer the final part of your question, without Sandy, I wouldn't have had a clue.

Tuesday, February 7, 2012

Book Awards

This one is an expensive entry fee, but I thought I'd pass along the info just the same.

Sharp Writ Book Awards

The winners of the 2011 Sharp Writ Book Awards have been announced! Please click here.

The 2012 Sharp Writ Book Awards are now accepting submissions!


Genres of works accepted by the 2012 Sharp Writ Book Awards:

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POETRY: All categories of Poetry

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BIOGRAPHY / AUTOBIOGRAPHY: Books that are biographical or autobiographical in nature, including personal memoirs.

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Monday, February 6, 2012

Virus effectively killed

For those who hadn't heard: BEWARE OF BUGS

I picked up a virus on Friday. A warning that there was spyware popped up (and popped up and popped up and popped up), that offered to take me to a website where I could buy cure software.

Now I have good virus software and I had received one warning from it, that a stock photo I was about to download was infected. I halted the download, but evidently not in time.

More, I refused to pay them to remove the virus they gave me in the first place. I called my usual gurus and they came today and swept the machine clean.

Bless them.

Until this happened, I hadn't been aware that a virus or .exe program could be attached to a .jpg file. So I thought I'd post it here, just in case any of you guys were also unaware. Keep that virus protection updated and active at all times. And if something starts to happen, shut down right away and call the repair guys.

Anyway, I'm back and ready to go to work again. Sorry for the lost time.

Friday, February 3, 2012

Catching UP!




New books out as of Feb. 1:

STAR WOLF, by Warren Graffeo.

Space opera. Faced with overwhelming odds, a crippled Star Wolf prepares to make a last stand, while Jarn and Elera are ordered to make a suicidal dash through the Gryll ranks to warn the fleet. E-BOOK.


THE MISTAKE, by Bruce Castle.

by Bruce Castle

A couple is brutally murdered in Pittsburgh. Months later, several murders strike Baltimore County. Undoubtedly, these seemingly unrelated killings would have become a cold case if Detective Sergeant Aubrey McKensie of the Maryland State Police had not been assigned. e-BOOK


THE WRITE HONOR,

by Anna Dynowski

Harmony Village Series, Vol. 5

Though she’s a romance author, Krysia Barciniak has no illusions about love and romance and a happily-ever-after for herself. e-BOOK



LADY SLIPPERS FOR MY LADY

by Lynette Hall Hampton

Coverton Mills Series, Vol. 1

Whether it is coincidence, fate or predestination, 53-year-old author, Heather Masterson’s life changes in Asheville, NC, when a man lays a book in front of her and says, “Please sign this to the real Alex Hargrove.”


POSTCARDS FROM MR. PISH: A CROSS-COUNTRY JOURNAL

Mr. Pish series, Vol III

by K. S. Brooks

Postcards from Mr. Pish: A Cross-Country Journal, Volume III follows the lovable Jack Russell Terrier as he embarks on a new adventure, traveling from Washington State all the way to Maryland, through ten states and four provinces of Canada. Mr. Pish writes fun postcards with full color photographs and maps highlighting his days so that children, and adults, can learn about our world in an entertaining and memorable way.


PAPER BOOKS THAT WENT TO PRESS OR BACK TO PRESS THIS WEEK:

None.

E-BOOKS THAT WENT TO PRESS OR BACK TO PRESS THIS WEEK:

POSTCARDS FROM MR. PISH: A CROSS-COUNTRY JOURNAL by K. S. Brooks

THE MISTAKE, by Bruce Castle

THE WRITE HONOR, by Anna Dynowsky.


GALLEYS THAT WENT OUT, OR WENT OUT AGAIN THIS WEEK:

DRAGON SPEAKER, by Ray Morand.


Work began or continued on the following:

SNOW ESCAPE, by Roberta Goodman


BEST SELLERS AT FICTIONWISE

Based on data gathered within the last 20 days. Icon explanations
1. Long [78390 words]Lady Slippers for My Lady: A Coverton Mills Romance by Lynette Hall Hampton [Romance/Suspense/Thriller]
2. Long [61055 words]The Mirrored World by Meghan Roos [Science Fiction/Mainstream]
3. Long [55288 words]Mr. Right in Turn-Outs [Stockland Firefighters Book 1] by Tonya Ramagos [Romance]
4. Mid-Length [41069 words]Playing With Fire [Stockland Firefighters Book 3] by Tonya Ramagos [Romance]
5. Short [7965 words]A Child's Garden of Verses by Robert Louis Stevenson [Classic Literature]
6. Mid-Length [42478 words]Atonement [Farthinghome Book 3] by Nina M. Osier [Science Fiction/Suspense/Thriller]
7. Mid-Length [45109 words]A Medic in Iraq: A Novel of the Iraq War by Cole Bolchoz [Mainstream]
8. Long [58428 words]Murderous Roots by Virginia Winters [Mystery/Crime/Suspense/Thriller]
9. Long [51820 words]A Grandfather's Gift by Hugh Carter Vinson [Family/Relationships/Mainstream]
10. Long [80027 words]Two Faces Two Faced by Kathryn Flatt [Suspense/Thriller/Mystery/Crime]


HIGHEST READER RATINGS AT FICTIONWISE:

Based on highest average ratings by at least 5 readers. Icon explanations
1. Long [66889 words]A Little Princess by Frances Hodgson Burnett [Classic Literature/Children's Fiction]
2. Long [121796 words]Pride and Prejudice by Jane Austen [Classic Literature]
3. Long [61049 words]Minder's Oath [High Places Series: Book 2] by Nina M. Osier [Science Fiction/Mainstream]
4. Long [98906 words]Ghost Dancer by Arline Chase [Historical Fiction]
5. Long [113180 words]Captain Blood by Rafael Sabatini [Suspense/Thriller/Classic Literature]
6. Long [57142 words]The Mysterious Affair at Styles by Agatha Christie [Mystery/Crime/Classic Literature]
7. Long [75310 words]The Secret Adversary [Tommy and Tuppence Book 1] by Agatha Christie [Classic Literature]
8. Long [68911 words]Dark Elf: [Book 2 of the Red Knight Chronicles] by Ray Morand [Science Fiction/Mainstream]
9. Long [70408 words]Slow Dancing with the Angel of Death [Hollis Ball and Sam Westcott Series Book 1] by Helen Chappel [Mystery/Crime/Humor]
10. Long [76981 words]Tortured Souls [Arbiter Series Book 2] by Matthew L. Schoonover [Horror]

Thursday, February 2, 2012

Basics of viewpoint -- writng tip

Basics of Viewpoint

The best way to choose viewpoint is to ask yourself whose story or scene it is. Once you know who the story is about it’s safe to assume that most of the story will be told from that character’s viewpoint, either in first person “I” narrator, or third person “She or he” narrator.

There are several kinds of viewpoint. "First Person" is written with an "I" narrator, as if the story happened to you. "Third Person" limited, is written in third person, but limited to a single point of view. This is the viewpoint chosen for most short stories. Also most girl-in-danger stories are written in first person limited, while Harlequin and most genre romances are written in third person limited. In either case “limited” means limited only to the main character’s viewpoint. The reader cannot know anything the main character doesn’t see, think, or feel.

The reader should see through the main character's eyes, feel with the main character's heart, and think with the main character's brain.

One way to get emotion across for a character, when we're in another character's viewpoint, is to use body language to express the other character’s inner feelings. Describing body language the main character sees will get the other character’s emotions across to the reader, whether the observing character understands them or not. Remember the classic romance ploy where the heroine thinks the hero is mad because his teeth are clenched and the inevitable muscle in his jaw is jerking, but the reader knows it’s only because he’s in the throes of desire. We all read body language all the time. It does no good for someone to tell us, "I'm not upset at all," if their face is red, and their arms are crossed firmly on their chest, while one foot taps the floor.

In some third person stories, viewpoint can change from one character to another at scene breaks or chapter breaks, but it should not jump unintentionally from one character's head into another. Many well-published writers ignore this rule, but if there's a slip, reviewers will always notice...